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Oil (prompt)

ax frozen in hand
heartless hallow man of tin
waiting for oil 

Author notes

Prompt: "I'd like to see poems going from the prompt: Oil -Just go with whatever comes to mind. Don't hold back. Don't limit yourself."

I thought of the Wizard of Oz.
haiku 5-7-5

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  • Oleander
    June 3
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    Nice job! I enjoyed this and seeing where it took you. Sorry comment is short. I'm on an iPod.