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like clockwork

scent still makes a way into the air
after all these years, i am twenty-fucking-three
i should know better
between right and … or know better
when left is just that, left

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my, my how broken i have become.

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  • WisdomWarrior
    June 4

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    Hey. Long time no see. Good to read you again. Always a pleasure and a mind bender. Thanks for that.

    One Love,

    John


  • neurosine gold member
    June 1

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    We are all broken and faulty. To say nobody is perfect is really not such a bullshit thing to say as it may seem on the surface. We are all broken in different ways though. Evolution obviously doesn't work as well as we might hope. Thus rendering Intelligent Desisgn into the messy explaination it is.
    Look at the facts. Accept the consequences. Keep on living.
    The fact that you're broken doesn't differentiate you from anyone. The fact that you're willing to admit it put you a point above par. Go with it.