i always felt like something was missing
but slowly that feeling is drifting with our reminiseing
do you even understand
i turn to jello at the slightest touch of your hand
it scares me to death
the way your kiss makes me lose my breath
thats never happened to me before
i've never had a feeling i couldn't ignore
will you turn out like the rest
or end up being the best
could you be the pick of the tree
the one to capture my heart and not set it free
A simple smile is all it takes
to make me forget all my mistakes
as if all my pain has washed away
you make me smile everyday
i'm scared to tell you how i feel
to one day wake up and none of it be real
part of my dreams
another one of lifes schemes
so i pray to God it's not an illusion
and to be set free from my confusion
that my heart will no longer break
and that this is one feeling i'll never shake
i've already had too much heartache in the past
that's why i wish on stars for this to last
if you could only see all the tears i hide
maybe you'd understand why i like you by my side
Author notes
i know it's corny, and not my best, and honestly i'm stuck on a title for it, but i have had writers block for awhile, and i just started writing one night when i couldn't sleep, and this is what i came up with. he knows about it, and wants to see it, but i just can't get myself to show him, i'm scared to really.
give me an input, please, advice even. and guys, what would you think if your girl wrote something like this?
Comments
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You're great at your rhyme, thats what I find amazing about you, its quite effortless and reads well. I see a lot of pain and heartbreak in your writes, and I think if this could be true, the feelings here are bang on...straight from the heart which makes reading intriguing, like this one. My suggestion to you would be, dont ever give up, keep writing, as always things get better. I liked this, its not bad at all.
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