FORGOTTEN
Spider webs spilled across old love letters.
Simple melodies play from an aged phonograph
Memories of a long forsaken naked embrace.
Circles filling circles in a lonely timeless dance.
Hidden in the past.
Forgotten
Wine glasses laced in time’s powdered dust.
Rooms that once were filled with laughter.
Clinging to the way things used to be.
Pages of poetic prose started but never finished.
Swallowed dreams
Forgotten
Teardrops wasted on perfumed paper.
Drooping flowers in an empty vase.
Words that once held heartfelt emotions.
Useless verse brushed away as trash.
Fractured harmonies
Forgotten
Clocks stopped at eleven-eleven.
Heartache wounds never really heal.
Sympathy for prayers unheard.
Blood from unspoken voices.
Sweetest suicide
Forgotten
Author notes
prose poetry. Just feeling a little in the dumps
Please tell me what you think
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What a fabulous write you have yourself here Ck.
It is so much different, from what I have usually read of yours.
Hey, but change and exploring with different writing, is good.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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Thank you Cynthia very much for reading "forgotten" it was a different write for me. I appreciate you taking time to read it.
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My beautiful man, why such sadness that is blanketing your soul? Where has the smile gone from your heart?
Your poem tugged hard at my own heart, and I could feel the emptiness and the despair that you have woven into your written words.
The visuals within your poem, painted such loneliness and heartache in the mind of the reader.
Although this is a sad write, you have penned it so well, allowing the reader to 'see' within your heart and soul.
This is a beautiful write Charley, sad... but beautiful, and so heartfelt.
May the warmth of the sun kiss your soul with the love of your friends and family.
You know that I will always hold you in my heart, that special place that belongs to only you and me.
I send you many blessings of love and happiness my beautiful lover friend.
Always your Angel.
~Angel-anne~ xxxx
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Thanks Angel for reading my poem, sorry i haven't been on much our computer froze up and I won't get it back till june 15th. Glad you liked the poem, I'm okay, I was just in the dumps that day. Always love hearing from you. Charley
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Beautiful poem. It almost made me cry. I was envisioning ghosts. Wonderful poem. Keep writing sweetheart. I love it. I'm sorry you are feeling down. I am always here for you.
LOVE GUIN
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thanks Guin for reading and commenting on my poem. Glad you enjoyed and that you are always here for me. Love ya, Charley
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deep and unusual. my favourite part are:
Clocks stopped at eleven-eleven.
Heartache wounds never really heal.
Sympathy for prayers unheard.
Blood from unspoken voices
Ckwriter, i idont understand the part that "Sweetest suicide " played in contributing to this work although i like it a lot as a body of verses. thanks
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Thanks for reading my poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah I'm not real sure sweetest suicide fits here either, thanks for pointing that out.
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