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Commencement to now. (Unfinished)

As I lay awake at night, I think back to the very beginning of something so wonderful
Back to when we first met, to when my eyes first fell upon you and imprinted your beauty inside my mind and scarcely upon my heart.


From when we started our wonderful adventure together, past 3 years ago.
Remember how shy and naive we were way back when? 
Or how about hanging out together for the first time?


Can you remember when we first hugged?  When we acknowledged our favorite authors?
How about your heart-warming smile?  (Still the same, if not better.)
Or when I stole your purse and held it captive because it was yours?


Do you remember our first Semi together? You looked amazing in your white and black dress.  I'm sorry I can't dance to anything fast, but thank you for not holding it against me.
I just wish I tried harder to learn to dance and get a feel down...like you can.


Oh, what about the Jakes Event?  How cool was it to shoot some arrows?  Don't worry, I'm not holding anything against you for striking the heart of the deer   (Though I don't know about the others...I feel bad for the poor defenseless trees and undergrowth )


What else can you remember from the start, ma Cyar'ika?

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  • Sealight
    July 9, 2009
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    How about the first Bowl For Kids' Sake? I still remember when we high-fived. And the one after that, when we weren't sure if you could make it? My heart stopped when I saw you.


    • CloudxAeris
      July 9, 2009
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      I do too. You and I also reached over 100.
      Awww! I love you.

      • Sealight
        July 9, 2009
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        Yay! We did!
        's Zach back! I love you too.


        • CloudxAeris
          July 9, 2009
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          Yupperz!
          I'm glad I mean so much to you.

          What else did I leave out of this? Also, I'd like to hear your side of all this if you don't mind? (Or, you know, you could write your own like I did.? )


          • Sealight
            July 9, 2009
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            I wish would tell you how much more often, though.

            Oh, many, many things. Remember in Fleeter's class when we first started going out, I was so afraid to even make eye contact with you. I didn't know where to look. Oh gosh, my side? (Maybe)


            • CloudxAeris
              July 9, 2009
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              Me too. But I can see it in your actions too.

              Oh wow. I was afraid of saying something stupid, let alone eye contact. So I know how you feel. Yes please! ( Please? )


              • Sealight
                July 9, 2009

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                You do, though. I am way in debt. Yay!

                Wow. Yeah... I don't even know. (I'll ruin it, though.)


                • CloudxAeris
                  July 9, 2009
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                  I know, I see each day as another opportunity to let you know how I really feel..since life could end so fast and be very cruel. I believe you will when you want to. But I don't see why you would be afraid to tell me. I'm not going to hurt you, and if I do, I'll apologize and make it up to you as best I can.

                  (How could you ruin how you feel? Just be honest, be yourself.)


  • Nickey Mouse
    June 1, 2009

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    The heart shot was amaseing! I wish I had my cameria then so I could of flimed it.And only you and Ally could tango at the shooting range at Jakes. lol.


    • Nickey Mouse
      June 21, 2009
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      Question when are you going to finish this poem? You forgot about Prom oh and the whole thing she said at BK.

      • Sealight
        July 9, 2009
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        Nikki, you're never going to let that go, are you?


        • Nickey Mouse
          July 27, 2009
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          Nope.It was one of thoes moments that make you go awwww like when I read all the above posts.

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