My love cant be bought
Roses and jewelery are nice
But they can smother me
There not necessary to win my heart
Show me how much you love me
Please oh god please dont tell me
One more time that you love me
Because your words carry little meaning
Drap your arm around my waist
Kiss me in the street
Show the world the your passion
Claim me as yours in front of everyone
Love me with yur actions
Be forceful and aggressive
Never be shy and never ask permission
When im yours, every part of me is your possession
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Such a great message to all guys. Great write!
My love cant be bought
Roses and jewelery are nice
But they can smother me
There not necessary to win my heart
Show me how much you love me
Please oh god please dont tell me
One more time that you love me
Because your words carry little meaning
Drap your arm around my waist
Kiss me in the street
Show the world the your passion
Claim me as yours in front of everyone
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Good poem, i feel the same way about my boyfriend
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Good poem, i feel the same way about my boyfriend
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Good poem, i feel the same way about my boyfriend
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Some nice things happening, true emotion displayed, I have a question about the third line in the third stanza that does not fit well with me, "Show The World The Your Passion" otherwise the poem is fine,enjoyed
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good, i like it
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great job on this, keep it up for suree (Y)
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I like
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thanxxx<3
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