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Everyone Has Someone

If I could sing for you, I'd hold the longest note.
If I could dance for you, I'd spin til I was dizzy.
If I could perform for you, I'd read the sweetest monologue.
If I could stare at you forever, I'd be complete,
If I could be with you for a few minutes, I would smile for days.

Everyone has someone,
Who makes them smile.

Everyone has someone,
Who can make the world disappear.

Everyone has someone,
Who will hold til they fall asleep.

Everyone has someone,
Who will kiss them soft yet passionately.

Everyone has someone,
Who feels safe with them.

Everyone has someone,
Who they be themselves around.

Everyone has someone,
Who makes them happy.

Author notes

Different from my usual style I know, but I was going for something different.
I wanted to add some emotions into the piece, but didn't think it was right....

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  • Mac 729
    June 3

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    Your right... Everyone has that someone...
    Sometimes you have them and then loose them and then only do you realise they are the one...
    Sometimes you know from the start and it all works out amazing...
    Sometimes you know it, loose them, then tormented for years by these feelings for them because they cant decide if the feelings they feel are true or not...

    Great piece hun.
    Told you I always read your work! xx


  • fake-or-real-smile
    June 1

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    Aww hun I really like this

    Teehehe I see someone is having a good effect on you

    Its different but everytime you try different, it always seems to work out really well!

    XXXX


    • sky black
      June 2
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      Sadly not the person you'd think..
      Remember YEARS ago when I wrote a poem series called 'To Him'? (list is around somewhere) yeah well... hes in aussie atm, and he rang me the other day to tell me he still loved me... and i figured out I still care MUCHLY for him, but whether its right to happen or not... erugh complicated.
      MSN talk much needed on this one my lovely!
      Hope ur okies and thanks for comment and claps xxxxxx <3


  • starlite
    June 1

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    this is extremely true, and yes different from all your other pieces lol. but still good. you basically put into words what i've been trying to get across to so many people, and it sinks in, bravo baby.

    • sky black
      June 2
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      Welcome back
      And thank you... my style is going here there and everywhere at the moment, much like my life, soap drama much?.... i think that comes with studying drama at uni tho :S hmmm
      Anyway, thankies and yes its alllll so very true, just wait and be patient hun, everyone will feel it sometime in their life xxx

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