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Six feet under

What's this
in my mouth?
Dirt?
I can’t quite see;
it’s dark.
What’s this?
No heartbeat?
Quite an interesting
observation.
It’s rather chilly
down here.

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Prompt: Pushing up daisies.

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  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    June 2
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    wow. great take on the prompt thank you for entering and i wish you the best luck in the contest