Up
Down
In
Out
"This is what
I'm all about"
Short
Long
Soft
Rough
"More please, hon,
to prove I'm tough"
Gentle
Forceful
Graceful
Clumsy
"What, who cares, it
makes him love me"
Happy
Fearful
Wise
Unknowing
"This is where my
heart stopped growing"
Yes?
NO
He's angry;
I'm glad
-Come on, baby, I
need it bad!-
"Oh fine"
Author notes
Woke up with first stanza in my head. This is a much different style than I usually write.
What did you think?
Comments
-
Very children's rhyme-y, with some not-so-childish subject matter. I love the juxtaposition of the two, very classic style with... "racey" substance.
-
-
Thank you very much! Yes, I usually write longer stanzas and just thought, why not, try something different. I edited this a lot actually. heh. Thank you again!
-
-
I really loved the style of this poem and the wording definately bounced along to the whole thing. Beautifully done. I am suprised there have not been any comments here yet. Just a superb piece.
-
-
Thank you :)
I usually don't write about sex in this way, and this is how my sex life used to be, so I just thought I would write it in a different way that was very blunt and straight forward. Thank you for reading and commenting!!
-
Adding your comment:
