lightning strikes
two hearts struck by love
DARK skies
clouds mating above
rain falls
cleansing all sins
only hope
rejuvenates in the end
Author notes
two hearts can surrender to love, only hope can keep them together
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- PREWRITE MADNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Kathraina.
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I agree whole heartedly with your AN.
This is a lovely piece, I love the concept you've used here.
Marvelous job with this piece.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
beautiful
I really like this one. I've always found stormy skies and rain romantic. But the analogy of the clouds coming together and the two hearts was very well thought out. It's a beautiful piece.
Pixie
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luvd your comment, DARK
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wow
this is awesome i luv it gr8 write luv the background hav a look at my poetry i wud luv 2 know what u think pls i totally get the feeling of this poem i luv the two hearts struck by love part amazing
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thanx, DARK
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Wow~
Miss Your presence here my Friend and wish You much Happiness~
Powerful message You have shared ~ and so true
about hope rejuvenating in the end
You are Precious~ Happy to see You on
Woot!!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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thanx and itz nice to know that you even found your way back here for my absence was almost a year, luvya, DARK.
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Dear Dark, it's a magical moment when two hearts can surrender to love and keep the love growing, it takes a lot of work and understanding between the two parties to keep the passion alive, but well worth the effort for to be loved is a wonderful emotional feeling. Lovely poem Dark.
Love Joan
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thnx and i would agree with everything you said about work and understanding, luvya, DARK.
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