She’s standing, waiting by the door
For her loved one, gone off to war
But sadly, he’ll return no more
It was such a long time ago
Together, their love did grow
Before he died and became a hero
Again, sadness sits upon her face
As memories fall on their old place
Stood empty, in ruins, a disgrace
Author notes
Pix Inspired ... See Contest page
A contest entry
- What's In A House by JeannieD Hunter.
1000 points, ended June 8, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent write on the prompt
Great imagery, well done on the HM , Congratulations.
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Thank You guardianhost
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Wonderful
Such a great write for the image. Congratulations on the honorable mention
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Thank you penman
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Oh how sad! I too can see from the picture how this could really be. It may be short, but it really paints deep emotions and sympathy for her and the house. Thank you for entering!
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Thank You so much for the HM
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xxx ~ Judie ~ xxx
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Oh yes this is a sad story, but I can see it all in that once stately, now decaying mansion.
Best wishes ion the contest
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Thank you Gaylene (mum) loves ya lots
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Course I'm mum Love you lots too sweetheart
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A sad story me LLT
but a great take on the given prompt.
Best of luck in this contest loves ya bunches 
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Thank you me LLT loves ya bunches tooo
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