They find it hard to see,
Just what you’ve been through,
They find it hard to accept,
That I’m grateful to you.
You woke up,
What else could you have done for me?
You saved yourself,
And through that action, saved me.
I know how much you wanted to die,
But you stopped,
At the very edge of life, at the veil,
You stopped and thought about me.
They find it hard to see,
Just what you mean to me,
They find it hard to accept,
Just how grateful I am to you.
If you had died,
I don’t know what I’d do.
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They find it hard to see,
Just what you’ve been through,
They find it hard to accept,
That I’m grateful to you.
This is very touching. Your rhyme was pretty good. Not forced at all. (That's a big turn off with me
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Others often find it hard to understand or accept how much a person cam mean to us. Lovely poem and a lovely choice of title, if I may say so!
You took a very general title and turned it into something worth reading. Good job!
Thanks for the entry!!
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