I'm Falling, the wound is deep
Your words like silver bullets
punch through me...
I try to be strong for both of us,
but it's so damn hard...
Your tears rain upon me as I hold you in my embrace
for I will never let go, I love you....
My eyes sting with the onset of tears,
but they don't come...
"Why!!!! Why does this happen?
Why must you go?!?"
I understand it, but I don't want to accept it.
I'll alway's be there for you, and never will I back down
You've stolen my heart, but I've given you my love
Remember me.
{ In remembrance of Lainey Miller Who died in a car accident on her way to her father's funeral}
Forever in my heart, I love you baby.
A contest entry
- Everything that has ever hurt you by borrowing.moonlight.
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wow this isful you let your emotions show im so proud of im sorry about what happened great write tho
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this is very heartbreaking. this was incredibly sad and at the same time perfect. i love everything about this great write
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oooo this is so sad. forst of all a funeral on christmas. and diing on chrostmas. i am soo sorry for your loss. i feel so bad. it is good tho that you remember her threw poetry.
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this was sadly powerful.. i'm so sorry for your experience. thank you for entering this
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wow this is a really sad poem. its very ironic that she died on her way to a funeral though. fantastic write.
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Yeah, that's the only way I can think about it and kinda smile. She loved Irony.
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