Sweet Lover (A Sonnet)

This sickly sweet lover glides his tongue across
My body, soft as a single flower petal
He wishes for me to slowly sip his sauce
I am willing, yet I make him wait, he becomes unsettled.
Then the moment comes, he can't take it anymore
So I do agree, then onto the pillow I do fall
He becomes enraged as I whisper "I'm a whore"
He traces my nipple and won't listen at all
Then he lays with me, entangles our legs and arms
Pretends I said nothing, for it hurt him to hear
So I forget too, unable to evade his seductive charm
He is the shining headlights, I am but a trapped deer
Let our guard down for the night, we do dare
No one comes as days pass, no one interrupts our affair

Author notes

This is my first sonnet, please be gentle, yet firm.
I had a really sexy dream awhile back and just remembered it now and felt like writing somethin..
I think I'll have to re-write this sometime, because I like the story, I just don't think this is very good.