A whisper, a tear, looking back through the years,
a soft spoken word, that can bring so much hurt.
Why was it said, was there ever a need,
done out of malice, or to make my heart bleed.
A noise, a murmur, twisted then said,
aimed at my soul, until it is dead.
You're breaking me up, you drive me insane,
please be quiet, don't say it again.
These words that you tell, they hit to the core,
they sound straight from hell,
"I DON'T LOVE YOU ANYMORE."
A contest entry
- The sun in my soul's sinking lower while the hope in my hands turns to clay. by coloringmysenses.
1750 points, ended July 22, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice emotions captured in such a short piece.
Well done and thank you for entering! <3 -
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This is brief but very emotive. It carries an impact. Very well done.
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I see you have gotten the hang of entering our contests - that is great
Best of Luck in this!
Quite a heartwrenching poem that hits out and screams from the page - excellent
I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
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