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Tuesday (Again?)

4.21.09

Standing there with your piercing blue eyes
They jolted me into place and I couldn’t move
I couldn’t breathe
My heart stopped beating and I felt my body turn hot

I knew there was something there
But I was scared and didn’t think you’d feel the same way

But then when we hung out
Last Friday night
It was so frightening
I could hardly breathe and my heart was pounding
When I felt your skin on mine
When you looked right through me
I closed my eyes and cried
Because of this feeling that I haven’t felt for so long

But do tell me please
If I fell in love with you
Would you rip my heart out like he did?
Would you tear it up and throw it out in the sea?

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  • Dmonik
    May 31

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    Oh to love and be loved..... We crave it so much, that reciprocation of our emotions, but oft we wonder, does our hearts desire, hear what is truly in our hearts?
    This is an excellently penned piece.
    May you get your answer soon.
    Bravo

    'D' (Scott)