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less then friends

we were so cute
playing in the sky
grown to a stage
clouds start to cry
tears not of rage
hearts to be broken
scars burn deep
a demon awoken
freed from its sleep
blue eye crumble
melting into tears
clouds soon rumble
prevoking our fears
a kiss or a lie
all seem the same
innocense to die
she is to blame
once we were friends
not to be parted
the relatioship ends
our hearts departed
this our mistake
a war we started

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  • Stardust-luvr
    June 5

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    it is always hard when you lose a friend whom you had trusted and had such a bond you once thought to be true leaving the heart in tear-filled shambles. its also hard to feel like you are burdening your true friends with your disheartening disdain as you feel you must be stronger than you feel inside - keep communication open and hope things get better thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx