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Like the world was once thought to be squared, I’ve now discovered that brains are not mis-shaped ovals, but exact squares. Four walls, a ceiling and precisely one window and door. That’s the difference between a brain and a mind. One is explainable, predictable, containable. The other is a stubborn smoke of pure frustration, creeping in for more. Was that sleep? or was my mind just at play again?. The brain has no faith, the mind knows no logic.
A classic case of simplicity Vs complexity.
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This is comfort calling late.
The Arian figure whose consciousness i cannot commit too. You are perfection in its purest form, completely boring. A black eye could cause an orgasm these days. So i ask, is comfort embracing us causing a reaction of relaxation or has it completely shredded us into a million pieces of blank paper. Where are the stories for our next generation?
"We were comfortable"
No intensity, no adventure, but love. (All you need is love?)
and exactly 2.5 kids.
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Come as you were.
The tiles of the bathroom were cold remembered? Hands down on the floor at fifteen, you were more man than you can hope for in the future. This nostalgic rash has diseased my organs, such infection makes one feel dirty, so why are we so pearly white. Your irises are empty but your skin is subtle. Such sensations are indescribable but that’s the beauty within isn’t it. For once there is no explanation that drains us of all connection. Welcome to isolation in the spooning position.
Simplicity chose to stay.
Complexity chose to stray.
Any gooood ?
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i really like it!
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Ohhhh, I really like this : )
"So i ask, is comfort embracing us causing a reaction of relaxation or has it completely shredded us into a million pieces of blank paper."
Favourite bit.
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Ohhhh, I really like this : )
"So i ask, is comfort embracing us causing a reaction of relaxation or has it completely shredded us into a million pieces of blank paper."
Favourite bit.
xo
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"A black eye could cause an orgasm these days."
and
"his nostalgic rash has diseased my organs, such infection makes one feel dirty"
Those are some of my favorite lines.
This is a great piece.
Thanks for linking it to me.
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its a very complex write and you have to think outside the box to be able to understand it...it's AMAZING!
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That was really good. It makes sense to me. Everyone doesn't want to do anything that makes them "Uncomfortable." So now no one has any adventures or does anything fun. This was really good and really true. I like the last line a lot.
"Simplicity chose to stay
Complexity chose to stay"
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okay only one part was confusing to me... that was i
"The tiles of the bathroom cold were cold remembered?" Reading this as I did I was lost... did you mean to put the first cold in their. It disrupts the flow for me.
Other than that I did like this. I think it creative and it (other than that one part) made perfect sense to me. -
good :]
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