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Shh

Shh
It's a secret
He says as he takes me behind the gate
Don't tell.

Shh
It's a secret
They say as they pull out Camels from a bag
Don't tell.

Shh
It's a secret
She says as she shows me her scars
Don't tell.

Shh
It's a secret
He says as he cries on my shoulder
Don't tell.

Shh
It's a secret
He says as he takes me behind the gate
Don't tell.

Shh
It's a secret
I say, right now
Don't tell.

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  • Midnight-Glory
    June 16
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    I love it's simplicity. Even through the bluntness, it's still very powerful. Awesome job hun!