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Loving From Here Is Not Enough

There's no mystery to where this womans heart is

laying between the rails of life's train track

Soaring full motion as life simply travels amiss

for there is no time to stop and look back

~@~~@~~@~

Within his arms is where this lady longs to be

yet the reality is the distance between them two

Tender words shared that brought peace to me

can cause this whistle to blow through & through

~@~~@~~@~

Shivering I balance between loving here or being there

and the pain roars through me like a freight train

All aboard! The emotions seem to hang strong and fair

but living here alone without you is driving me insane

~@~~@~~@~

Closing my eyes I feel the vibrations of your love,

and realize indeed, loving from here, won't be enough

~@~~@~~@~

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Author notes

A contest entry for:
I have Fallen... in Love
oh Im in the mood for sappy
by WhiteGirl 750 points, ends May 31, 32 entries In Feelings, Love, Memories, Personal, Sad
Im in love so naturally I am in the mood for some sappy love poems. My realtionship is complicated and we arent able to be together even though we are in love. So I dont mind if your poem about love is sad... most of the time love comes with pain



P.s. It hurts to love and not be able to reach out and embrace them, to hold them in time of need, to caress their fears away..sometimes life sucks.

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  • DolceVito gold member
    May 31

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    Wonderful take on the prompt...I know a thing or two about love and the long-distance thingy...nicely done


  • WhiteGirl
    May 31

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    Very nice poem! Oh and your P.S, that is exactly what is going on in my life right now. The bittersweetness happens every time we speak, wanting so badly to be close. Yah life does suck sometimes! Nice write!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 31

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    Beautifully formed from great poetry, you are a superstar at this

    Jeff


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 31

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    goodness

    such a loving piece, the aching of the heart to be with the one it desires most..i certainly can relate to and you make the reader feel each word..this is just a purely beautiful and loving write, and wow HOW IN GOD'S NAME, DO YOU GET THAT EFFECT?? I'd love to do that or something like it..


  • maralisa silver member
    May 31
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    aw a wonderful write good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    May 30

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    wow honey

    this is wonderful, there is no doubt where my heart lies and it is with you my dear. the miles between us are growing smaller every day. i will come to Texas for you and i will sweep you off your feet. i love you with all heart, Texas is just a tick away. your loving husband, lover, and best friend. Rick


  • In Too Deep1
    May 30

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    SUch a beautifully penned and thought out take on the prompt. Love the shape. Single in its stance, the rose signifies the bitter sweet excursion of the heart, as it is presented with petals layered. each petal a page from the heart, penned with ink only found in ones deepest depths. Its stem reminds us of the long journey that we each take. Around many, we soak up life in solitude.. hoping to become that bloom worthy of a KIng or Queen, and to be that King's or Queens greatest treasure. Much like you, this depicts such a beautiful becoming, and I have enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes in the comp my Erotic Playmate

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