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don't say don't






air above, air below
hanging cloud-high to caution
each wing aright

born be, born not be
loves heavy weight
airborne

airborne
weight heavy loves
be not born, be born

aright each wing
caution to high-cloud hanging
below air, above air





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A little play on mirrored meaning and words... looks great centered, lol....

Prompt: symmetry

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  • Wonderful Palindrom to fit this contest prompt.

    I thank you for this. It is a form I that I absolutely love and admire when done well and works well for a contest of this nature.

    You have done a fine job in expressing through this form. Thank you for your entry. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela