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sweltering

Flying high...
naked and lost within
my imaginary breezes ~ and voices-
yours so melodic, tickles my ear. 
lala land symphonies pause

to listen.









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Prompt: Song Birds

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  • penman gold member
    June 25
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    Excellent

    Wow, such an amazing write. So very well written. Congrats on the gold.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    June 12

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    Beutiful take on the prompt! I have always loved song birds... cept when they start early in the morning!


  • DeJaBlue
    June 4

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    Wonderful take on the prompt...sometimes I wish I could fly away to lala land and stay for...well...a very long time, lol...


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    June 2

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    what an awesome take on the prompt, i love this...really well done and c ongrats on the gold. well deserved


  • Daizee silver member
    May 31

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    This reminds of that time between being awake..and asleep. When you just float. Congrats on the gold bling

    Love,
    Stacy


  • Desire gold member
    May 31

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    Ooooooooooh~

    My Oh My~ this is one Excellent quickie
    Love the reference to: imaginary breezes ~ and voice -

    Brilliant! I could not help but chuckle at lala land symphonies
    You go Hot Momma
    Congratulations on Your shiny!
    -throws confetti-
    Woot!
    Gosh... Teach me how to write
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in all You do
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 31
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    excellent

    very nice imagery, and congrats on the gold.. it's deserving!


  • lunarlunacy
    May 30
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    beautifully brevity here, congratulations on the shiny.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    May 30

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    KNew it was destined for fame and riches.
    Congrats!
    So to fade soo soon but I have an early call tomorrow.


  • Stardust-luvr
    May 30

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    well deserving on the golden shiny the words make me think of someone very dear to my heart. well done and many blessings always xxx


  • sheltered
    May 30
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    my personal favorite
    and thank you for the heads up


  • sheltered
    May 30

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    lala land
    is something i'm trying to avoid right now
    cause i'm flying high and lost within
    if i didn't know better would think you wrote this about me
    I am so vain

  • Pure Thought silver member
    May 30
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    How do you do this? BEst one I've read, including mine.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 30
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    oh yeah me likes the title.

    a beautiful write.


  • tarnished-angel42
    May 30
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    Aw lol a little wicked.

    I love it . Nice work.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    May 30
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    Love the spacing of the last line, very nice take on the prompt
    ♥
    whisper

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