I'll protect you, control you, own you,
make you nothing, make you everything.
Just one hand is all I ask, a hand to hold, and your word that lasts...
No more lies, don't play the outcast,
listen to me, get rid of that mask,
don't hide, don't run away,
the more you struggle,
the more you'll pay.
your life will be vibrant, less gray,
just don't hide, don't run away,
your darkest desires,
the quickest way,
to feel enlightened,
to feel less self-hate.
It'll be my pleasure to build you,
to make you feel, to will you,
with my hand I'll heal you,
control you, own you, feel you,
all I ask is a hand to hold,
and your word that lasts...
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It hurts like hell to be treated this way but the love never fades
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Interesting
Seems like you have a lot on your mind. I like the poem a lot. Nice touch whit the last stanza, it pulls it to a great end with such a perfect example of the cycle of abuse. Great job!
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I guess it's a cycle of abuse. It's a lot of things, depending on the person reading the poem, thank you.
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