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Words Released

A fire burns inside
Words fighting to be free
I can't keep them anymore
With the heat burning me

Emotions long since hidden
Shoved back into my mind
Twisting into senseless words
All my scrambled thoughts combined

The words refused to come before
But now they refuse to leave
Thoughst of anger, sadness, pain
That only writing can relieve

Author notes

Okay, so it's been a long time since I wrote anything and I don't know why i suddenly felt the desire to now. But like the poem itself said, there were all these words that wanted to be said, and writing this helped. I stink with titles so i just called it what it is, words released.

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  • darlee77 gold member
    October 10

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    Writing is the best release, I think. This is very good. The rhyme, flow , words, all work together to make it a great poem. God bless.


  • individuality gold member
    August 29

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    a good piece of poetry penned, well writing is very theraputic, when i fist started writing so many moons ago now, i was full of anger and pain and the writing eased that, and now, lol nothing has changed i am still a mad git.

  • It's so good to hear another poem of yours!!!! I'm sorry that you're so emo, though.