You’re My Journey That Never Ends
You’re My Journey That Never Ends
You’re My Journey That Never Ends
You’re my journey that never ends
You and I best of friends
You’re my journey that never ends
Before beyond when time begins
The way you lay your sleepy head
Upon my silken breasts
And feather bed
The magic moment of your sighs
The neon in-between our eyes
You’re a gift of love
A mercurial sunrise
You’re my journey that never ends
Two as one in love
Best of friends
You’re my journey that never ends
Two as one
Best of friends
On a journey that never ends
Within a timeless place
We begin all over again
Within a journey that never ends
We begin all over again
Within a journey that never ends
Author notes
Written for the love of my life
The seafarer of my dream
Who shall always be one in my heart
This is for you sweet sweet David Justin Hayward
Written February 22nd, 2003
A contest entry
- Contest for new March members ~Come Sail Away~ by Barbara.
300 points, ended April 3, 2004, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is a lovely poem and tribute but it is a pre-written piece and therefore not eligible for the contest, which is a shame.
~Von~ -
WOW Thats so beautiful! Great Job
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Tina yes I wrote this for my dear friend Justin Hayward....
and yes he has read every line
and we remain two stepping stones in time
a love divine
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Pretty indeed. I hope you have let the person you wrote this for read it, I am sure it would be very special to them.
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This is a very pretty poem, my only suggestion is to put all the information you have at the top in the authors comments at the bottom.
Good Luck!
Lakota x -
i know you talk about journey and the poem is very very beautiful..but for me it didn't capture the picture..but anyway good luck in the contest!..hugs..leanne xx
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Interesting 'twist' to this. Lovely images. I had wished it were a bit more specific to the painting, even though the use of 'journey', etc. were used.
Thank you for a lovely LOVELY poem! Warmlyk,CookieZeal -
Beautifully written and 'spoken'.
Thank you for entering this
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OMG, this is so extremely beautiful! Well written. Amazing lines:
"The magic moment of your sighs
The neon in-between our eyes
You’re a gift of love
A mercurial sunrise " Keep it up! God Bless.
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