Scattered all over the floor,
are the pieces of your heart.
Stories within each.
All fallen apart.
One that fell out years ago,
your abusive mother.
One that fell out days ago,
your cheating other.
With each loss it's harder.
More pieces dissolved.
For now though,
this puzzle remains unsolved.
Author notes
50 words exactly. Not sure how I did that. Lol. =]
A contest entry
- Should be studying, Here's A Quicke Instead by Hope Angel.
525 points, ended June 10, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sadd sadd ;[
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This is great, I loved how it flowed and how you used the prompt. Thank you for entering.
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Babe im here if you need me and I loved it Jesus your getting better....
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I know chu are, and thank you. :3
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o.o;;....wow...i have no words xD
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Hehe, thank chu. :3
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Wow. o.o. Brilliant. No words. You always take my breath away D:
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Thank you Gabbie. I'm sorry I keep taking it away. One of these day's you'll get it back though. Hopefully. <-< If not, sorry again in advance.
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