As you probably guessed
This is a direct response
And nothing less
You see while my booty was shaking
And your mouth was watering body aching
You were off somewhre daydreaming
I was thinking and scheming
You only thought the end was now
But I am about to show you how
To throw down the sick rhymes
That will truly blow up your mind
As a man you have no control
Over that active testosterone flow
So stand back and let me run the show
Moving and wiggling like you didn't know
Whether to reach out or to let me go
Your mind was on my body, poor fool
My mind was on that check I wrote to you
Looking as if you couldn't help it
But I made you supress it through my caresses
Dancing all sexy, but I am no stripper
Cause and effect makes me slick like flipper
And all this time you were throwin out smack
But it was in your dreams, I was just rubbing
Your Back!!!
Author notes
If you didn't know, this is a Direct response in a slam contest. It is in response to this poem http://allpoetry.com/poem/5389519 by a wonderful writer who goes by moluv10.
I read this piece and could not help but to respond. Hehe.
A contest entry
- ESTROGEN MIGHT Versus TESTERONE PLIGHT Spoken Word, RAP, & SLAM by ears2hearyou.
950 points, ended June 5, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Naughty but nice!
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fiesty little kitty u are where were you u when the battle began.. sitting in front of the mirror for hours getting all dolled up while the baby was starving... nice pen sweets enjoyed
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Considering..
I was on the board four spaces before you,
While you was sitting in your own stew,
Trying to pick up the pace for the fellas,
But I'm looking at bellies and see lots of yellows..
Uh-oh what was that, the sound of the mirror breaking
Because I am so breath taking, the baby wasn't starving
But instead was just bored with bs you were feeding
And again I leave you sitting there and seething
Look at it this way, at least you aren't bleeding
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I spit it site unseen for two rounds and everything applies...
but the fact of the matter is it's the last piece that can make or break you. I'm playing catch up to newer entries but I'm sure my boy moluv10 won't take this lying down. Way to put it down though girlfriend...it was on fire.
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LMAO...Beautifully done
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way to rock their world sister!
it is interesting isn't it?
apparently men think of sex every three seconds....
which does explain a lot....
one little bounce of the booty
and damn...they're all mush!
The boner brothers will love this poem!
ears/Seattle
way to backrub!
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Wow thats so strongly feminine. go girl power and all that. I love the flow and the rhyming is spot on, its not often rhyme comes across as anything but awkward but you pulled it off!
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You Go Girl!
Keep 'em comin' and they'll keep runnin'.
Estrogen might is what makes their lil wilies
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WOW! im drowning in a sea of estrogen here..lol you ladies won't let me up for air..lol another smack to my ass you delivered with this write dear.
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she is no rookie she is good!!
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Thanks for the comment!
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Oh no..
you didn't CUM after my dogg!! l.o.l. ooohh, you betta run n hide! l.o.l.
this was a tight lil piece though, for a ROOKIE !!
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Rookie? Listen here "Cookie", If you wanna rumble, I'll take that bet, and make you crumble. Ya know you love me! Thanks for this great and humorous comment. You know I do it out of love of the rhyme.
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