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The Wisest Advice I'll Ever Give You

Walking such a careful line
Endlessly watching for a sign
But you're already alive

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I hope whoever reads this, takes it to heart, as well as they can. I, myself, am trying my best.

Write whatever you want.. but write me something?

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  • Zarokk666
    May 31

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    short and very...optimistic, would be my first impression
    I like this piece very much Mj
    hope to hear from you soon
    Zarok

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