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Devil's Advocate

I have an old and familiar feeling again
Wanting me to tempt others to sin
Should I turn or give in to its embrace
Tempting me from a warm and familiar place

Oh how sweet to spin a tale of conceit
It is a bait that nobody wants to defeat
Or a story of how it will be in moderation
Then the excess will lead to exasperation

Let me lead you down to your greatest joy
Revel in the fact that you are now my toy
You are free to leave anytime you choose
There will be the small matter of your dues

Laughter today will lead to sadness tomorrow
However, I promise that you will feel no sorrow
I will make you happy and lustfully excited
To taste your pleasure will leave me delighted

Can you have me? Yes, you most certainly may
As long as you will have nothing more to say
Don't tell me you feel guilty because that is a lie
You will not escape me no matter if you try

I will see you smile as again you scream
This is so good that it must be a dream
This is a dream but, is it yours or is it mine
I will be smiling when I tell you this line

Then comes the time when you want it to end
All of your broken promises you wish to mend
It causes me to laugh for the sinner's sake
It will be fun when I finally see you break

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What would the devil's advocate think when called to lead others astray? Something to think about.

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  • wow

  • great job


  • metal4ever
    May 31
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    great job, perfect

  • How familar this seems, only I am my own advocate of antagonistic temptor, lulling and luring myself into laconic pits of vices and misanthropic actions.
    Anyhell, this is a great write, I think I shall veiw a few more from you.
    -cheers