Named it fuddy duddy,
a good name for putty.
I got it from buddy
and looking up suddenly,
"Look at is spiral together
looking stretched and
As soft as dough as tough as leather
What is the best method?"
Twisted in a spiral shape
than molded into a grape
going from curved to straight
A great way to escape
Fixed in a big knot
Helping thoughts un-clout
Creating clarity from doubt
Making a smile start to sprout
Strange how silly putty works
Helping smooth life's quirks
Spreading a wide tooth smirk
A smile to replace temporary hurt.
Author notes
Just nonsense on paper.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hahaha lol... that was cute! poetry should not always have to always be so heavy...kinda like sushi
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Hi robnj,
This is the first time I have read your work. My comment is a way of extending the same courtesy you have given to me by reading and commenting my poem.
I loved the title 'Fuddy Duddy' a nice cluue to the fun contents of your poem. It was a fun read - I look forward to rading your poems,
All the best,
Liveddog. -
Silly putty is pretty fun stuff, ya know
. Much like nonsense. It all has it's own place and it can all produce a smile so it can't be half bad.
It was a fun read.
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