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Life with death

Those last words,
You said to me,
broke my heart,
and I wish you were,
Here to take them back.
You kept me safe,
Away from your friends,
That would love to hurt me.
You said you couldn't love me anymore,
because you weren't right for me.
Don't you see,
That's a lie? ,
That I really did,
need you?
Tell me,
Do you feel sorrow and pain? ,
Did you gain to what I lost?
You free me,
From your love but now ,
I'm blind and cannot see.
You left me in the dark,
But if you did hate me,
Long ago,
Would you really care now???

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  • HopelessPoet1087
    May 30
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    i love this poem!!!!! ur so amazing :-) keep up the fantastic work baby