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A Man that I could Trust

Powderd charms of satin wishes
drape across my dreams this night
and split like fragile eggs upon the shore.
Though broken, still they shine!
like stars scattered in my mind
glowing brighter and more lovely than before.

Their potent honey power drips
like a sweetheart's tender kiss, Tis true!
and every blow upon my heart you sent
faint rushes to my cheeks
and every blush of scarlet mixed with paler shades of light
I found a man that I could trust
to tuck me in tonight.



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  • grampabob1946 silver member
    August 3

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    What a wonderful poem!

    The only problem is it's hard to read. The design covers up the words.
    The powderd charms of sa..... I can't make it out. Is it salt pork? Is it saw mills?

  • oh hun! this is really beautiful!!!! I truly loved it! how is the baby?


  • peaceimout
    May 30

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    I like your Bg and the words really are lovely sentiments of contentment within

  • aww, this is very lovely, i like the flow, and tenderness to the poem, take care, keep writing
    Stephanie ♥