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Midnight

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I look at you, I see the signs,
I start to play the waiting game;
it's an hour before midnight
as you start to forget my name.

Everybody once admired
your eloquent turn of phrase;
it's forty-five to midnight
when you can't recall the days.

It seems like only yesterday
I was a child who needs you;
it's twenty minutes to midnight
when I have to start to feed you.

It's five away from midnight
as I tearfully kiss you goodbye...
and the clock chimes midnight
as you softly slip away to die.

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  • Beautiful the way you captured this metaphor. I like how you used it like the poem did, but for the time of the day, instead of the month.
    I know a few people approaching the 12 o'clock and it's never easy to accept it.
    Sometimes you never do.
    Always you never do.

  • a good piece, ah death, it claims us all with its age-old wisdom, you reminded me here of a poem i have which i may post, one done years ago, similar theme.

  • Now this is beautiful and so profound, we loose our loved ones sometimes in such a tragic fashion, long before they actually die

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