When you have been away
You see peoples true colours
You see their real intentions, how they really feel
You see how they can be so cruel and cold
Like you're just a hammster on a wheel
They show you that they never cared
But dont say it to your face
There is no room for turning back
You see your fate has got a seal
There is no time for a heart attack
Now your heart is left to reel
Author notes
Wow first write in a long time, very rusty!
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Nah, nothing rusty about it. The best poetry inspire. For me, it was the ideal I've held onto for so long; the mask of sanity.
I've never seen myself so much in someone elses poetry, and that's something that makes this so unique. It is full of luster, and so many images bounced around in my head when I read it.
Thankyou.
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I liked this. It was very detailed and it is true that by being away you can see how a person really acts. Great job and keep on writing!!!
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