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Morality Bites

For a drop of water, we lose an ocean
For a piece of land, we sacrifice our nation
God's own child, devil's creation
Human waste of criminal magnitude
Pregnant haste of inhuman attitude
High on adrenalin,love for blood
Low on morale,thirst for flood
Hybrid genes of twisted moods
Worms infested in the decaying foods
Laid bare in the open to rot
Mangled brains of a single despot
Home is where the graveyard lies
Dead bodies with their muted cries

-----Shubhen-300509-4:14 pm

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  • Melodies
    May 30

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    Glad to read you, Shubs...

    Your poetry always tells a story and makes me wish I could hear more. You are a fine writer and I am glad to visit when you come by.


  • StarEyes
    May 30

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    Shubs,

    What a read this one is! You say so much with so few lines in this one! I love it! It would be nice if we could find a way to fix some of these problems huh?

    Great job!

    and love

    Nyetta