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Emotionless.

Bleak, Grey.
Is This Our Fate,
Are We Doomed To This Emotionless State?
People Are Murdered,
Not A Flinch,
Rape, Theft, Abuse?
Charity? Not A Sinch.

This Is Our World,
And Thats Okay,
Just Live Your Life Day By Day,
Laugh, And Cry, And Have Some Fun,
Because This Is Your Life,
And You Only Get One.

But More Important Than Things That Go Wrong,
You Have To Smile Everyday,
And Those Brave Enough Will Smile Along

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  • DougieJones
    June 1
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    way to go Bailee!! i love it!!!!! =D


  • Maggie Kay gold member
    May 30
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    This really made me smile at the end. I found it insparational.
    great work