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One more...

Tell me,
Make it clear,
Your perspective,
Is it unreal?

Watch me,
One more,
It wont hurt.

One more,
One more...

a dozen chances taken,
and its taken its toll...

My whole is filled,
Multi-colored trills,
Taking over me,
Blindly smiling,
At that I can no longer see...

Sensations unnatural,
I scream at the temptation,
giving in to fulfill my fear,
Overdosing just for the pain...

One more,
One more,
Untill i can take,
No more...

Psychosis dreams,
questioning beyond my means,
Desire for pain not death,
Still wondering on my last breath,
with tears in my eyes,
Why..........?

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  • Deep Words My Friend.

    This is my favorite stanza

    Sensations unnatural,
    I scream at the temptation,
    giving in to fulfill my fear,
    Overdosing just for the pain...


    But its rare to pick a favorite when all your words are so meaningful and so lovely.

    I love you and i love your work.

    .:unbelievable:.

    Love

    -Sarah Marie