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Understand Me

tired i stand
in this body
all day i be
working so hard

understand that i am bruised

so sorry for not
exploiting that need
affection won't be
given out by me

understand that i am bruised

appearance don't mean
that much to me now
exhausted i stand
i gave up all plans

don't call me at all
afraid i will fall

back into your arms
for one last deep fall
under deep waters
through tall uncut grass
wiped  out and miss-used


disgusted, i'm bruised

please be honest i'm unable to bite you :)

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  • moluv10
    May 29

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    deep write here. you have expressed your feelings well in this. has a nice flow to it also. keep it up.