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Les Terribles

Is there any escape?
Not in sight, she says.
Why not?
There is no light; nor darkness.
How is that possible?, heaved with a sigh of dispair.

A gust of wind blows back her hair from her tear-drowned face...
sticking to her lips, a tendril of faith drips down and lands in horror to the ground, sinking further, deeper and down.

Why does it have to be this way?, she curles her hands into a fist and shakes her head in a mourning fashion.

Life, my darling, is that of death.
There is no real meaning; no hidden truths, but brilliant lies and repetitive Prestiges that await your applause.

Like a rose, you could see that this girl was wilting.

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  • Oh..yes I can see the girl is wilting and that girls is very sensitive to the pain ..that girl is very good poet to show that wilting..well done..thanks for sharing..