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Solemn

Her eyes are open wider then her mouth
And she is waiting to hear them words
Her life is surrounding her with guilt
The daughter of a mad man has no place to turn

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  • Puppydog gold member
    May 30

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    WONDERFUL EXPRESSION!!!

    I am able to feel your words! You have captured the essance of that feeling of despair and defeat