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My Valley

a warbler
up in the misty hills
a lovely morning

wet with dew
eager to welcome the sun
morning glories

soft babble
by the thicket of bamboo
a mountain stream

beneath the trees
a field of colourful flowers
after the rain

a cicada chirps
from the shadowy trees
dusk

an owl's hoot
amidst the rustling of trees
in the moonlight

Author notes

Serial Haiku.

Prompt is www.3planesoft.com/img/nature_screen01.jpg

A contest entry

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  • forbidden-colour
    July 8

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    Thank you for entering!

    Lovely image you have portrayed here, you can smell the air and feel the breeze, well done for doing this.

    Thank you for entering
    Kindest of regards
    Sophie


  • MysteriousWhisper
    June 22

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    beautiful images! you did an amazing job with the prompt! I hardly needed to look at the picture since you described it so well! great job and good luck in the contest!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 22
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    very nice

    chain of well written ku...thank you for this entry also good luck
    Linda


  • myrataal silver member
    June 13

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    Beautiful and textured traditional haiku ...

    congratulations on a magnificent Silver, Lee!

    Love
    Myra


  • Draig aine gold member
    June 13
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    congradulations on the silver

    way to go lee, perfefect haiku, excellent form should be gold in my book


  • John Doe
    June 13

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    Beautiful Serial Haiku poem with delightful imagery of nature. Each verse is great by itself and they all compliment each other and work well together and flow nicely from one to the next to create a great poem. Thanks for entering.


  • Simply Olivia
    May 30
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    Lovely

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