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Carthage

I wanted movement, not a calm course of existence.
          I wanted excitement, danger and
  a chance to sacrifice myself for my love.
              I felt in myself a superabundance of energy
          which found no outlet in our quiet life.

                  This road has always led west.

I found the fundamentals of life
      just beyond the peak of understanding.
              I pursued greatness and fell short.
      I rot away, and the bug population is gnawing
              at my self-preservation.

A wanderer, a vagabond some would call me.
        I'd much rather prefer the title "Failure."





 

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