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Blazin'

she feels no guilt
no regret, sorrow, none of that
as the light singes the green
atop the bowl of the pipe.

she's so far gone, now
those drinks, she started pouring 'em down
one after another before she stumbled
down to the life of the party
the fire blazing yellow and orange.

no feelings of remorse, nothing to hide,
even though she broke the heart
of the only boy she ever loved

whatchu think? :D

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