the petals of a flower slowly fall free,
as they wilt away in sorrow,
never again to appear triumphant.
once that rose was beautiful,
its blossm so brilliant,
it glowed in the evening sun.
but now its time is over,
slowly melting away,
dying in the midnight moon.
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wow
your such an amazing poem writer it was short yet still amazing i loved it. -
Told you that people like your work :] But youuuuuuu didn't listen to me. I loved this! It was very good, my love :] Keep writing!!!
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Excellent
I like this,Dear poet, This was short and with a good message. I like the imagery You have done a Great job with this one piece here. a wonderful take on nature there is truth within your words There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Thank you for posting , Alexander QQ…
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holy wow tori!
this was awesome! 
such emotion, and so amaing. awesome write. keep up the good work!!
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wow! wholly crapola this is beautiful, best rose poem i've read. ! damn...
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