Raindrops fall to earth
Nourishing our garden world
With joy nature blooms
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joy nature blooms needs an article somewhere...
garden world is a bit abstract and big... make it specfiic! -
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Thanks for the critique Kevin.
Will work on it.
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I can see that
You should read my poem Spring and you said it in 3 lines.
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I will check it out Jackie. Thanks!
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This is never more true than this time of. My yard is in full bloom.
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Spring is great for flowers! And the gardens really start to grow. Thanks Daizee.
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Nice
Haiku doesnt really move me.
I do enjoy some of the excellent ones,if im in that kind of a mood.
This is a nice one.
Good luck! My friend.
Arlena
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Thanks Arlena. I have only written a few myself.
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Hey faderman!
This reminds me that every year when I walk in my yard wondering where all the different flowers keep coming from...nature's great!
"With joy nature blooms"
I can see nature with a smile on her face placing all the pretty flowers upon our garden world!
Loved this!
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You are so right! Nature is amazing! Thanks for stopping in its great to see you. Hope you've been well!
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Precious, well said
well done
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Thanks my friend!
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Nice
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Why thank you Olivia!
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Our garden world nourished? Nature blooms with joy
Very pretty,
Bear -
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Bear how can I be a manly man if you say its pretty? Thanks man!
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Stick your chest out, and lite your cigar
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Will do!
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