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day one.

EMTs. Stretchers. Pillows with thin white plastic covers. Electrical sockets covered with plastic baby-proof inserts. Marble tiles. Too many plastic bags. Vanilla scented hand lotion. Oxygen tanks ready for use. Privacy curtains. Cheap white blankets. Pretty blond people. Fat old men with stethoscopes. Cups to pee in. Lights. No cameras. Plenty of action. Muddy shoes. Dirty hearts. Gossip. Pain. and somewhere: a future.

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i was in the ER bored out of my mind when I wrote this. hope you like. :]

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  • CollegeQueer
    November 12

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    I loved it. You pretty much brought me through your day at the ER. Inspiration is spiking girl. I think I might write a story about my trip in the ER.

    Thanks for this,
    <3Nate


  • youhadme-athello.
    May 29
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    cups to pee in. my least favorite part of the ER haha.