He thinks he can win me.
i am no prize no trophy.
when i look in to his eyes i can't help but feel my heart rise.
though not will love or un-dieing pleasantry but with nothing more that despise.
two hands meeting as if old friends that have been parted for years.
like two eyes that do not wish to lose there few last tears.
broken wings that did not pass by walls of heaven, the doors of hell.
not like a small not in its strong everlasting shell.
smile try's to bring mine to awake it from the dead.
but i do not wish for your help,i will do it on my own instead.
unlike you i do not wish to inflict pain or hurt you anymore.
you still think you are the one i need the one i adore.
i did fee pain but it did fade.
the rocks that pinched mt heard have decayed.
and even my series of rhyming couplets don't show love, any love.
and my poetic license will help me not to appear dumb my love.
my lips feel sealed with out your kiss.
i should not feel like this i should not miss this.
i should be strong my poems hold me up now.
i few lines and bad rhymes is all i allow.
i found a new love she is beautiful like a dove.
she looks like a angel, my angel sent from above.
her heart made of gold.
her words never cold.
i love now to see myself.
i love her with all myself.
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that's truly amazing. you're an amazing poet! :]
xoxo____Sam:]
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you're such an amazing poet.
great write!
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OMG UR A REALLY GOOD POET!!!!!!!!!!!
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why thank you i will read ur work my friend :)
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Perfect
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once you revise this for flow and remove an odd word here and there, this poem is going to be amazing. even in its rough draft i loved it immensely.
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this poem is really good but it reads odd and has a typo right hedre
"nothing more that despise"
i think you mean "than" if not then that dont make sense. unless of course vin just being dense which is possible. -
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ah you don't see the the irony of it i was abusing my poetic license "because its a poem i have a right to say what i want how i want" we were doing poetry in English and they was poets that spelled so much wrong but said its they poetic license witch i thought was stupid,i was going to do more typos but was not use if people got the irony in this poem.
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lo lwell in that case i was being especially dense. it happens.. alot lol
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no the hole poet irony thing is a hard thing to graps
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