You gave me a vision
of what life is to be
You showed me the world
What I was to see
You promised me love
said you would always be there
to lend me a hand
to show me you care.
We walked through the days
never rushing our steps
we cherished our time,
for the time was well spent.
Then suddenly one day
You wern't there by my side
you were gone forever,
But not a tear did I cry.
I rushed through the days
By myself all alone,
Cherished our memories.
Although my anger's grown
Then one day I thought of you
And sighed a bitter sigh
The long awaited sadness
Pierced my heart, and then I cried
I cried for all the empty
dreams that people have these days
I cried because I had a dream
And then it slipped away
I cried because a love like ours
was always meant to last
to endure through out eternity
The present ,the future, the past
and although I wouldn't have changed it
In my heart I know it's true
A lesson learned the hard way
was the price of loving you.
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A contest entry
- your [ex]-lover is dead. .promptus!. by stepbystep.
1000 points, ended June 15, 16 entries
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Great work! I looooove it!!! This is so awesome, very vivid
You should've won...
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nice work capturing the torment of love vacating without our heart's consent. the emotion shared seems so vivid and real. thanks for sharing.
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Very honest well written write, its very inspiring. great work (:
keep writing
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i like the depth you showed in it and it is very well structured
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never rushing our steps
Omygosh i loved this. It's got quite a story with depth in it. and i love the whole
' the present, the future, the past'
you did a splendid job at rhyming and penning this. (:
thanks for entering and best of luck!
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