Dear Diary,
A friend of mine offered me something
it looked like a pill
i refused it
people are saying it feels good
I dont know if I should do it
Dear Diary,
I gave into my friend
I tried the pill
it tasted different
but the feeling i got
it felt so good
Dear Diary,
I got some more
and i love it
I keep doing it
when ever i can
I keep wanting more
I think im addicted
Dear Diary,
My report card came in
My grades are dropping
my parents are worried
they think i need help
they know nothing
Dear Diary,
The high is so amazing
I tried another pill today
it was so different
i saw things I didnt see
before
Dear Diary,
Another report came home
Im failing school
I got fired from my job
My parents confront me
they found my stash
they yell at me
telling me not to do it again
im so angry
Dear Diary,
I took alot today
to get rid of my anger
I cant breath
or move
I overdosed
Im dying
what do I do?
My parents were right
i cant
i just
cant
i am having trouble writing
I died from the overdose
see you soon
Author notes
Enjoy part 3.
Preview of part 4: Grief or drinking. Have not decided.
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wow. That gave me goosebumps
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that was sad.... but i really enjoyed reading it. awesome write!
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I liked this one more than the last one... it again goes into the perspective of real life problems that most never think about... So its normally hard to write about. But i think you did a wonderful job.. Great write
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wow so sad
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awesome bro
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Well this one was good as well. I think I like the first one the best. That is just me. Thank you for sharing.
~~Shannon~~
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hmm...i've overdosed once...obviously i survived...made me think twice about my life...this was a really great write...keep it up!
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wow, this is really good, nice job! :]
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Thank you.
Check out my other poems if you wish, read the first 2 :]
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this one was very strong and intense. I like this part. it keeps getting better and better
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Thanks Join the group if you havent
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Idk, i dont want to screw it up. its too good.
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Its fine :]
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oh wow...this one was intense. my best friend is addicted to just about every drug out there and this definitly made me think of her. great job.
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wow.... bro this is wicked!
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Thanks sis.
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Wow this one caught my attention. It's quite interesting. You are a good diary writer!
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well, if u read the other ones. Diary = God.
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Read them already
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that one is much better then the last
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Sure
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