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So Deep

It hurts, but I never really bleed
I’ve been caught by your love & now I’m far from lonely
When I sleep I wish you could be next to me
So deep but I never really bleed
I need something stronger would someone please
Just kill me knock me down then I could go back to sleep
I laugh but inside I’m dead and empty
I say I’m fine but really I’m not
So lonely, now you’re here and all that I’ve got
Thinking, I remember every glance you shot me
I’m harmed and losing all my sanity
I’m fucked up so much ill stop your heart from beating
I ask you one thing; please don’t give up on me.

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  • Mm this reminds me of a poem I wrote a while ago.... I know the emotions you're going through and I know it's not pretty
    I love you, feel better my dear.